英语高手,请帮帮我！！

以下是一小段英语，感觉有些地方不妥，但又不确定，恳请哪英语高手帮帮我，先谢谢各位了！！！

I once let the trustest love sliped away from below my eyes.Only to know that regreting myself when it was too late.It is no paint in the would can come near to this.If only God would give me another chance .I will said to the girl.I love you .If it had to be a limit of time .I pray it's ten thousands years.