My talking on 30th March
It is Saturday today but I come to work over time to prepare for the DOE training that will hold next month, there is a game for it, but since I nearly know nothing about it, I have to look for help from others and practice time and time again to learn more.
It is cold although it has been end of March, a lot of people catch cold, and unfortunately I am one of them.
My husband lost the chance joining our company, but he find a job in the swimming hall near our house as a lifeguarde. He has half day off in the daytime but has to work until 9:00 at night. It is good and the best is it takes only about 6 minutes for him to walk to work, much nearer than me and has the chance to become a simming coach.
It is cold although it has been end of March, a lot of people catch cold, and unfortunately I am one of them.
My husband lost the chance joining our company, but he find a job in the swimming hall near our house as a lifeguarde. He has half day off in the daytime but has to work until 9:00 at night. It is good and the best is it takes only about 6 minutes for him to walk to work, much nearer than me and has the chance to become a simming coach.
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“It is Saturday today” => “Today is Saturday.” -- make it simple
“DOE training that will hold next month” => “ … will be held next month…”: we will hold that meeting, but the meeting will be held by us.
“I nearly know nothing about it” => “I know nearly nothing about it …”
“practice time and time again to learn more.” = “ practice again and again to get familiar with the subject.”
… but he find a job … => but he has found a job …
… 6 minutes … much nearer than me” => “… much faster than what I have to spend …”
… and has the chance to become a swimming coach.” => “This job offers him an opportunity to become a swimming coach some day.” – a separate sentence
What do you think?